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Wednesday, September 1, 2021

Ryker Persuasive Writing

 Staying up late


I should be able to go to bed later.


Firstly we can play games together and spend time together.

In my opinion babies go to bed early. But big boys don’t need as much rest. 


I feel I do so much school work so I have earnt to be up late.

Being 7 years my bed time should be later.


Can I stay up later on the weekends now?


1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Ryker,
    This is a good topic choice, when I was younger staying up later was always so much fun. Now I'm older I love going to bed! I like how you have added firstly into one of your sentences.
    Do you think you can come up with any other reasons as to why staying later would be better?
    Miss Gill.

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